Email marketing content for prospective students should do more than fill an automation workflow. Each message should answer a real question, reduce uncertainty, and make the next step in the recruitment journey easier.
A subject line may earn attention, but the email body determines whether a prospective student understands the message, trusts the institution, and takes action. Strong copy connects the student’s current need with accurate information, a credible reason to continue, and one clear next step.
The following six writing principles can be used for inquiry follow-up, event invitations, program information, application reminders, financial-aid guidance, and admitted-student communication. They are designed to help schools create useful emails rather than simply send more messages.
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1. Give Each Email One Clear Purpose
Before writing, complete this sentence: After reading this email, the prospective student should understand ___ and be able to ___.
An email becomes difficult to follow when it tries to introduce the institution, explain several programs, promote an event, discuss financial aid, share a student story, and request an application at the same time. Select one primary purpose and move supporting information to the website or a later message.
Common purposes include:
- Delivering a requested program guide
- Explaining the next application requirement
- Inviting the prospect to an information session
- Answering a tuition or financial-aid question
- Helping an admitted student complete a deposit or registration step
- Re-engaging a prospect who has stopped progressing
Write the primary action before drafting the body. A message intended to book an advising appointment should not end with several equally prominent links to social media, the homepage, a blog, and the application portal.
The subject line and preview text should accurately introduce this purpose. Detailed guidance belongs in HEM’s updated email subject line guide for students, while this article focuses on the message that follows.
Use a simple email hierarchy
A practical structure is:
- Context: Why is the student receiving this message?
- Value: What useful information or support is being provided?
- Proof: What verified detail helps the student trust the message?
- Action: What should the student do next?
- Support: Who can help if the student has a question?
This structure works for both short operational messages and longer nurture emails.
2. Match the Content to the Student’s Stage and Declared Interest
Relevance begins with information the prospective student has knowingly provided or would reasonably expect the institution to use. Appropriate fields may include program interest, intended intake, campus, study format, language, location, event registration, and application stage.
A new inquiry may need an overview of the program and a named admissions contact. A prospect who attended an open house may need answers to follow-up questions. An applicant with one missing document needs a precise checklist, not another general introduction to campus life.
Example: The University of Waterloo email below introduces the institution and application process to prospects who are still learning about their options. The content reflects an early decision stage rather than asking immediately for commitment.
Build segments only when they change the information, timing, or action in a meaningful way. Useful distinctions may include:
- Inquiry, applicant, admitted student, or deposited student
- Undergraduate, graduate, adult, international, or transfer prospect
- Program, credential, campus, and intake
- Event attendance or advising activity
- Application progress or missing requirements
- Questions about tuition, housing, accessibility, visas, or academic support
Avoid unnecessary profiling. Age, income, exact location, or behavioural data should not be inserted into copy simply because the technology makes it possible. Personalization should feel useful and expected, not intrusive.
For a complete framework on what schools should send between inquiry and application, see HEM’s guide to email marketing after a student inquiry.
3. Lead With the Student’s Question, Not an Institutional Introduction
Prospective students usually open recruitment emails to solve a problem: understand a program, confirm a requirement, compare costs, attend an event, or decide what to do next. Put that answer near the beginning.
Instead of opening with several sentences about the institution’s history, begin with the reason the message matters now.
Less useful opening:
For more than 50 years, our institution has provided transformative learning experiences through a commitment to excellence and innovation.
More useful opening:
You requested information about the September Business Analytics program. Here are the admission requirements, tuition details, and next information session.
Institutional proof still matters, but it should support the student’s decision. Use evidence that is specific, current, and relevant, such as:
- Credential and program format
- Accreditation or professional recognition
- Faculty expertise
- Placement or experiential-learning opportunities
- Student-support services
- Verified outcomes with dates and methodology
- Current tuition, deadlines, and entry requirements
Example: The University of Alberta email below connects its message with a specific institutional proposition and provides supporting evidence rather than relying on generic superlatives.
Avoid guarantees about admission, employment, salary, visas, scholarships, or career outcomes. Claims should be accurate, supportable, and consistent with the destination page.
4. Make the Email Easy to Scan, Understand, and Use
There is no universal word count that guarantees email performance. The appropriate length depends on the complexity and urgency of the message. A deadline reminder may need only a few lines. Financial-aid instructions or an admitted-student checklist may require more detail.
What matters is whether the recipient can quickly identify:
- Why the message was sent
- What information matters
- What date or requirement applies
- What action to take
- Where to get help
Use short paragraphs, descriptive headings, lists, and sufficient spacing. Place essential dates and instructions in live text rather than embedding them only in an image.
Example: McGill University uses a short introduction and bullet points to make funding information easier to scan.
Write accessible email content
Email copy should remain understandable when images are blocked and usable with assistive technology. Include meaningful text alternatives for informative images, use empty alt attributes for purely decorative images, and give linked images text that describes the action they perform. The W3C Web Accessibility Initiative recommends that text alternatives convey the information or function represented by an image.
Additional accessibility practices include:
- Use descriptive link text instead of “click here”
- Maintain a logical heading hierarchy
- Use sufficient colour contrast
- Avoid communicating meaning through colour alone
- Use buttons and links large enough for touch interaction
- Keep important text readable when enlarged
- Provide a plain-text alternative where appropriate
Test emails on relevant mobile and desktop clients before sending. A responsive template is useful only when the copy, links, buttons, and forms remain usable on a small screen.
5. Use a Human Voice and Personalization With Restraint
Prospective-student emails should sound like they come from a knowledgeable institution and, when appropriate, a real person. Clear, direct language usually creates more trust than exaggerated promotional language.
A useful tone is:
- Respectful rather than overly familiar
- Helpful rather than pressuring
- Confident rather than full of unsupported claims
- Specific rather than filled with slogans
- Consistent with the institution’s brand and admissions experience
Personalization should improve relevance. Using the correct program, intake, campus, or event can be more useful than automatically inserting a first name. Always provide a fallback value and test records with missing or unusual data before sending.
Example: Arizona State University’s “Gold is going to look good on you” message uses a recognizable brand idea while keeping the language connected to the institution.
Student, faculty, and alumni stories can add credibility when they are accurate, representative, and used with appropriate permission. Do not edit a participant’s experience into a claim they did not make.
Use AI as an editing assistant, not an institutional authority
Generative AI can help teams explore outlines, shorten drafts, adapt reading level, or produce test variations. Every version still requires human review for program facts, tuition, deadlines, credentials, accreditation, outcomes, policy, tone, privacy, and links.
Do not paste confidential applicant or student information into an unapproved tool. Maintain a documented review and approval process for AI-assisted email content.
6. End With One Primary Action and a Clear Expectation
The call to action should describe what happens next. “Learn more” may be acceptable in some contexts, but a specific action is often more useful:
- Review admission requirements
- Book an advising appointment
- Register for the information session
- Upload the missing document
- Compare tuition and funding options
- Complete your application
- Confirm your place
The destination must continue the message. A button promising application requirements should not lead to the institution’s homepage.
Include one prominent primary action. Secondary links can support the message, but they should not compete visually with the intended next step.
Set expectations around timing and support. For example:
Submit the form by October 15. Admissions will review it within five business days. Reply to this email if you need an accommodation or have questions about the required documents.
HEM’s dedicated guide to email CTA best practices for schools provides a deeper treatment of button copy, placement, destination alignment, and testing.
A Practical Prospective-Student Email Template
The following structure can be adapted without turning every message into the same generic template:
Opening context
You requested information about [program] for [intake].
Primary answer
The program is delivered [format/location], takes [duration], and requires [most important requirement].
Supporting value
Students receive [relevant support, experiential learning, or verified program feature].
Next step
Review the complete requirements and submit your application by [date].
Support
Reply to this email or book a conversation with [team/person] if you need help.
Primary CTA: Review admission requirements
Adapt the order when the student’s question requires a different response. An incomplete-application email, for example, should lead immediately with the missing item and deadline.
Measure Whether the Content Helps Students Progress
Open rates are no longer sufficient evidence of content quality. Apple Mail Privacy Protection can privately download remote content in the background, which limits a sender’s ability to determine whether a recipient actually opened the message.
Measure actions connected with the email’s purpose:
- Clicks to the intended destination
- Replies and questions
- Advising appointments
- Event registrations and attendance
- Application starts and completions
- Document submissions
- Offers, deposits, and confirmed enrollments
- Unsubscribes and spam complaints
Compare performance by audience, program, intake, message purpose, and stage. A message with fewer clicks may still be more valuable if it produces a higher rate of completed applications or qualified conversations.
Protect Trust, Consent, and Deliverability
Strong copy cannot compensate for poor list practices or technical delivery problems. Gmail requires all senders to meet baseline authentication requirements and places additional SPF, DKIM, DMARC, spam-rate, alignment, and one-click-unsubscribe requirements on bulk senders. Yahoo has similar authentication and easy-unsubscribe requirements.
Recruitment teams should:
- Use permission-based lists and document consent
- Identify the institution and sender accurately
- Use honest subject lines and message content
- Include an easy unsubscribe mechanism where required
- Suppress unsubscribed, invalid, and inappropriate records
- Keep SPF, DKIM, DMARC, DNS, and TLS configurations current
- Monitor spam complaints, bounces, and delivery failures
For recipients in Canada, commercial electronic messages may be subject to CASL, which generally requires consent, sender identification, and an unsubscribe mechanism. Commercial messages in the United States may be subject to CAN-SPAM requirements, including accurate headers and subject lines, a postal address, and a functioning opt-out method. Institutions should obtain legal guidance for the jurisdictions and message types involved.
Prospective-Student Email Writing Checklist
- Give the email one primary purpose.
- Match the content with the student’s program, stage, and declared need.
- Answer the main question near the beginning.
- Use verified institutional facts and current dates.
- Write short paragraphs, headings, lists, and descriptive links.
- Keep important information available without images.
- Use personalization only when accurate, expected, and useful.
- Include one prominent next action and a matching destination.
- Explain where the student can get help.
- Test accessibility, mobile rendering, links, tokens, and tracking.
- Measure progression beyond opens and clicks.
- Confirm consent, suppression, authentication, and unsubscribe requirements.
Frequently Asked Questions
How do you write an email to a prospective student?
Start with the reason for the message, answer the student’s immediate question, provide only the evidence needed to support the decision, and end with one clear next action and a way to get help.
How long should a prospective-student email be?
Use the shortest length that explains the message accurately. A reminder may require only a few lines, while financial-aid or application instructions may need headings and a checklist. Scannability matters more than a universal word count.
What should a student recruitment email include?
Include accurate context, relevant program or admissions information, verified proof, a clear action, the appropriate destination, and contact information for questions or accommodations.
How should schools personalize recruitment emails?
Use accurate and expected information such as program interest, intake, campus, event activity, or application stage. Avoid sensitive or unnecessary details, provide fallback values, and test all personalization fields before sending.
Should every recruitment email have one CTA?
Most messages should have one visually prominent primary action. Supporting links may be included when they help the reader, but they should not compete with the main purpose.
Are email open rates reliable?
They are directional rather than definitive. Privacy features and automatic image loading can affect open data. Use clicks, replies, registrations, applications, deposits, enrollments, unsubscribes, and complaints to evaluate actual outcomes.
What makes recruitment email content accessible?
Use logical headings, descriptive links, readable type, sufficient contrast, meaningful alt text, live text for essential information, accessible buttons, and layouts that remain usable on mobile devices and with images disabled.
Effective prospective-student email content is useful before it is persuasive. When each message answers a real question, reflects the student’s stage, and leads to an appropriate next step, email becomes a connected part of the admissions experience rather than another promotional interruption.
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